Introduction

debate   controversy   discussion   view  

There is ongoing debate ongoing debate
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lively controversy
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an intense discussion about whether or not children should learn a foreign language at an early age.

unreasoned   supportable   insupportable   questionable  

Looking on it as an insupportable insupportable
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unreasoned
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questionable assumption, I will seek to challenge it in this essay.

Body paragraph (Evaluating the idea)

escaping the fact   denying the fact  blinking at the fact   recognizing the fact  

There is no escaping the fact escaping the fact
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denying the fact
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blinking at the fact that state can support a larger number of people in country with this policy.

because   as   so   in that  

The world is becoming warmer mainly because because
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as
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in that there is increased concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere.

bear out   confirm  test   demonstrate  

Many research studies have fully borne out fully borne out
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simply confirmed
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clearly demonstrated this claim that consumption of fast food can put people at risk of heart diseases.

Body paragraph (Presenting the personal view)

Going by my experience,   In my point of view,   Based on my personal observation,   Judging by my knowledge,  

Going by my experience, Going by my experience,
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Based on my observation,
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Judging by my knowledge, I say it would be better if this plan was devised according to the needs or conditions of countries.

justification   primary reason   thinking   argument  

The justification justification
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argument
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primary reason for my opinion is that not all countries need specifically railway or even road systems.

In effect,   In practice,   Indeed,   In fact,  

In fact, In fact,
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In effect,
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In practice, an increasing number of people agree that more effort should be made were the environment is concerned.

Conclusion

although   much as   for all   (even) though  

Although Although
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Much as
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Though allotting money to railways can serve a vast number of individuals in certain regions, it will most probably be impracticable in all locations.

Thus   Therefore   Owing to   Hence  

Thus, Thus,
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Therefore,
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Hence, it seems to me that the idea is not essentially correct.