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An effective health care system should encourage people to take preventative measures against illness and disease, rather than encourage them to rely on treatment.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

agreement disagreement

• For:
• • It is cheaper and more economical for the public and government both,
• • It can improve the quality and quantity of life for every individual,
• • Preventative measures are more warmly welcome by the public than treatments.

• Against:
• • It is impractical in all the situations, e.g. Cancer or Aids,
• • For prevention, we lack trained and experienced experts to actively inform and help people,
• • There is not clear plentiful evidence suggesting that even after taking these measures the disease would be stamped out.