Unclear topic sentence: In my view, there are many solutions. || Emotive words: ...unfeeling, ignorant businesses...
Oftentimes, writers start their essay without mentioning the topic at hand, start their paragraphs without any clear topic sentence at the beginning which summarises what the paragraph is about,
use emotive words (unfeeling, wicked, ignorant, dreadful, ...), include unclear and unknown studies or even casual personal examples, all of which
negatively affect the quality and authenticity of their argument as well as essay.