"The number of paragraphs in essays may vary depending on the specific instructions for each task, but in general one paragraph for introducing the issue under discussion, one or two body paragraphs for introducing causes, another one or two paragraphs for suggesting solutions, and one for concluding the essay are needed."

Now the suggested format of the previous page has been used for developing this essay. Now can you choose the right choice in each gap Pay attention to all choices in the gap as they are mostly some common mistakes made by other IELTS candidates. ?

    Recently, the subject matter of high crime rates in metropolises            became has become becomes a not only disturbing but also pandemic issue, with a number of            causetive cause causative factors which I will briefly explore            after while before suggesting some solutions in this essay.

    Technically,            a combination of combination of a combination factors may appear responsible for alarming crime rates of major cities. The main culprit seems to be the wide socioeconomic differences leading to fierce competition among population for resources. As everyone cannot simply make use of fundamental facilities, they may begin turning to illegal            violations. actions. acts. Another principal factor, in the equation, is the materialistic culture of today’s world            , especially , specially especially, large cities. There are numerous businesses with a vast variety of appealing products/services whose advertisements encourage most members of society to actively seek ways to upgrade themselves and to outclass one another. One of those ways, somewhat easy and fast, is resorting to offenses.

  To cross over this problem, I can propose one or two corrective measures. One commonsense approach is that governments pursue more            coherent open-door egalitarian policies. This can be done by providing and distributing wealth and opportunities more equitably            into within outside the social domain. Over time, this would ensure that more citizens will fairly            accessing access access to resources; however, such policies may be unrealistic in underdeveloped countries.

    A further reasonable step, to take in            juncture with conjunction with junction with the previous one if possible, is developing educational crime-prevention programs in various sections of society. This can be achieved by simply providing a wide range of purposeful courses/classes and campaigns at school or community levels. In the long run, this would promote a more            civic uncivilized civilized culture in communities while internalizing nobler values.

    In sum, much as the high crime figures in megacities can stem from social-economic gaps as well as acquisitive culture of current society, these can to a certain extent be stemmed if facilities are more fairly shared, or ideally a more            refined pure better culture is cultivated.