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Recently, the subject matter of high crime rates in
metropolises
metropolises
=
large cities
=
chief major cities
has become a not only
disturbing
disturbing
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distressing
=
concerning
but
also pandemic issue, with a number of causative factors which I will briefly
explore
explore
=
consider
=
address
before
suggesting
suggesting
=
proposing
=
putting forward/forth
some solutions in this essay.
    Technically, a combination of factors may appear responsible for alarming crime rates of
major
cities. The main culprit seems to be the wide
socioeconomic differences leading to fierce competition
among population for resources. As everyone cannot
simply make use of
simply make use of
=
easily utilise
=
gain easy access to
fundamental facilities, they may
begin turning to illegal acts. Another principal factor, in the equation, is the materialistic culture
of today’s world, especially large cities. There are numerous businesses with a vast variety of
appealing products/services whose advertisements
encourage
encourage
=
spur
=
incentivise
most members of society to actively seek ways to
upgrade themselves and to
outclass
outclass
=
surpass
=
outrank
one another. One of those ways, somewhat easy and fast, is resorting to
offenses.
offenses
=
unlawful acts
=
delinquencies
   
To cross over this problem,
To cross over this problem
=
To resolve this issue
=
To address this question
I can propose one or two corrective measures. One commonsense approach
is that governments
pursue
pursue
=
operate
=
implement
more egalitarian policies. This can be done by providing and distributing
wealth and opportunities more equitably within the social
domain.
domain
=
sphere
=
arena
Over time, this would ensure that more
citizens fairly access resources; however, such policies may be
unrealistic
unrealistic
=
ineffective
=
impracticable
in underdeveloped countries.
    A further reasonable step, to take
in conjunction with
in conjunction with
=
in combination with
=
in concert with
the previous one if possible, is developing educational crime-prevention programs in various sections of society. This can be achieved by
simply providing a wide range of purposeful courses/classes and campaigns at school or community levels.
In the long run, this would
promote
promote
=
foster
=
cultivate
a more civilized culture in communities while internalizing
nobler
nobler
=
more righteous
=
more honorable
values.
    In sum, much as the high crime figures in megacities can stem from social-economic gaps as
well as acquisitive culture of current society, these can to a certain extent be
stemmed
stemmed
=
averted
=
precluded
if facilities are more
fairly
fairly
=
equally
=
properly
shared, or ideally a more refined culture is cultivated.