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    Recently, the subject matter of high crime rates in metropolises metropolises
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large cities
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chief major cities
has become a not only disturbing disturbing
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distressing
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concerning
but also pandemic issue, with a number of causative factors which I will briefly explore explore
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consider
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address
before suggesting suggesting
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proposing
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putting forward/forth
some solutions in this essay.

    Technically, a combination of factors may appear responsible for alarming crime rates of major cities. The main culprit seems to be the wide socioeconomic differences leading to fierce competition among population for resources. As everyone cannot simply make use of simply make use of
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easily utilise
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gain easy access to
fundamental facilities, they may begin turning to illegal acts. Another principal factor, in the equation, is the materialistic culture of today’s world, especially large cities. There are numerous businesses with a vast variety of appealing products/services whose advertisements encourage encourage
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spur
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incentivise
most members of society to actively seek ways to upgrade themselves and to outclass outclass
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surpass
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outrank
one another. One of those ways, somewhat easy and fast, is resorting to offenses. offenses
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unlawful acts
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delinquencies

    To cross over this problem, To cross over this problem
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To resolve this issue
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To address this question
I can propose one or two corrective measures. One commonsense approach is that governments pursue pursue
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operate
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implement
more egalitarian policies. This can be done by providing and distributing wealth and opportunities more equitably within the social domain. domain
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sphere
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arena
Over time, this would ensure that more citizens fairly access resources; however, such policies may be unrealistic unrealistic
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ineffective
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impracticable
in underdeveloped countries.

    A further reasonable step, to take in conjunction with in conjunction with
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in combination with
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in concert with
the previous one if possible, is developing educational crime-prevention programs in various sections of society. This can be achieved by simply providing a wide range of purposeful courses/classes and campaigns at school or community levels. In the long run, this would promote promote
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foster
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cultivate
a more civilized culture in communities while internalizing nobler nobler
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more righteous
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more honorable
values.

    In sum, much as the high crime figures in megacities can stem from social-economic gaps as well as acquisitive culture of current society, these can to a certain extent be stemmed stemmed
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averted
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precluded
if facilities are more fairly fairly
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equally
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properly
shared, or ideally a more refined culture is cultivated.